Smoking is banned in many of the places of Spain, because to smoke is very bad for our health, and no only for the person that it smokes, also for the people who sorround it.
I think that this law is fair, because the people (every time more) die for the cancer in his lungs, and this law makes some persons doesn't look forward to smoke.
This law also is fair because if people now smokes less than before the law, the pollution in our country will be less.
Nowadays, the babies who are born, they've many problems of breaht (bronchitis, pneumoniae...), and ih his mothers weren't smoke, I think that the babies wouln't have any problem.
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Hi nora. it's good but I've made some corrections. There your corrected paragraph goes:
Smoking is banned in many of the places from Spain, because smoking is very bad for our health, and no only for the person who smokes,but also for the people who are near the smokers.
I think that this law is fair, because the people (each time more) die of lung cancer, and this law makes some people not feel like smoking.
This law is also fair because if people now smoke less than before the law, the pollution in our country will be less.
Nowadays, the babies who are born, have many breathing problems (bronchitis, pneumoniae...), despite having non-smoker mothers.i
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